THE MOVEMENT: ROUGH CUT

I am having problem with this edit. I'm not sure what story to tell or how to approach it. Iknow the story is about Addie and the poetry movement within Sheffield but there is so mcuh visuals to go through and as soon you move into a different scene a new story pops up. Me and Sebastian have found it really hard to create something interesting. 

Our structure is that we start in his bedroom and he talks about his inspiration and motivation and short biography about himself. We include the cutaways of his inspiration and other scenes.

From his room, we then go to the Rutland Arms where he the poetry community in Sheffield is. Here we show his family and his experience of being around them.

We introduce other poets like Daniel Turner who have had an impact on his life and other poets that are funny and interesting.

We end of with him telling us about his future plans. This involves either his personal plans of the movement of poetry within Sheffield. me and Sebastian are still deciding on what note to end it on.

This is our rough structure for this documentary. It might change as we go along.